FEW PEOPLE OWN UP TO THEIR FALLACY, I HAVE HURT MYSELF, HERE IS A PLACE WHERE I WILL OWN UP
Friday, July 30, 2010
Words
I found a word in every thought
Seldom sold and seldom bought
I found a penny in thy name
Saved it till, from your frame
I lost a phrase in every dream
My severed hope, flowed in brim
I saw you come, I saw you leave
I saw my life stand in brief
I sold few moments to my fate
I lost my words in a debate
Often now I think of you
In my walk, in my blue
Now our words have lost its charm
Yet, we thought not to harm
Now we speak of mundane life
Of a long day's work, of our strife
I see you prosper, I see you win
Where will I go, in between?
I question days, I answer nights
I am guilty of all my fights
Now that you have turned
And took your voice
I throw some words, I make some noise
In my silence, now I wait
But I know that its too late
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"I question days, I answer nights
ReplyDeleteI am guilty of all my fights"... Shy, you wrote it in so very true a moment... this perhaps proves friends reflect friends' thoughts!
sometimes you end up reading just what you have been aching to say but just don't know how.. thanks, shy.. this is something i needed to read...
ReplyDeleteits beautiful... But ALL IS WELL... trust my words... going to be back soon.... to bangalore.. and.... to your words....
ReplyDeletehey! you've matured, the heart is where the home is ... or should I see it as the other way round? good luck dear, wish you the very best now, then and always
ReplyDelete@ Malo: I really dont have words to thank you rt nw, but yes if life ever gives me a chance to payback i'll do :)
ReplyDelete@meeradidi: I really longed to speak to you, but my current status is such that it is difficult ... I'll get back and this write up was due :)
@neon: lets c :)
@ biki: u have written abt me and nt my write up, will call ya :)
(well this is a comment on behalf of my dear friend Anakana, she is unable to comment so ... )
ReplyDeleteJust loved it ..
"I saw you come, I saw you leave
I saw my life stand in brief"
This reminds me of a famous bengali song -
"Amar bolar kichu chilo na ..
Cheye cheye dekhlam tumi chole gele ..
Sob nie gele tumi ja diechile ..
Anondo , hashi , gaan sob tumi nile ..
Jawar belae sudhu nijeri ojante Sriti tai gele tumi feley ..
Tumi chole geye .."
Luv u
~~ Anks